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I didn't mean
to say THAT Avoiding Sexist Language
Sexist language
is language that is meant to include all people, but inadvertently excludes either men or
women.
Why do writers need to avoid
sexist language?
If you are taking or have taken an English writing class
here at Dixie, you've probably heard a lot about ethos. Ethos is "the hearer's faith
that the speaker (or writer) is a good and trustworthy person" (Ramage and Bean, 17).
A writer wants to present a good ethos or character to the audience so the audience will
find him or her believable. A good ethos will make your arguments even more convincing; a
bad ethos will undermine your arguments by making your reader doubt your credibility.
If writers use language that the reader finds either
offensive or inaccurate, the reader will lose faith in the writers' arguments. The end of
all argumentation is persuasion, and writers cannot persuade people when they offend them
or make inaccurate claims.
How to avoid sexist language
1. Don't assume that a particular job is filled by a
particular type of person: not only are many doctors women, but many nurses and
secretaries are men. Use terms that can apply to both men and women. For example, the U.S.
Post Office now officially calls the people who deliver the mail "mail carriers"
rather than "mailmen." Talk about "flight attendants" instead of
"stewardesses." Remember, the military is made up of both male and female
soldiers, so a discussion about "the men in today's army" will exclude many
soldiers.
2. Avoid gendered pronouns (like he and she, his and her,
etc.) by making them plural. For example, the sentence "A nurse needs to care about
her patients" can be changed to "Nurses need to care
about their patients."
3. Avoid terms like "man"
when you mean to include women as well. "Man" (and similiar terms) can be
confusing as well as inaccurate, since "man" might mean "all people"
or just "male people." Change: "Since the beginning of time, man has
worried about death," to "Since
the beginning of time, people have ...
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